How about "skyline" or "in the distance"...
September 17, 2010 4:19 PM Subscribe
When a book is reviewed by an editor, do they look for words that are repeated too much?
posted by SpacemanStix to Writing & Language (10 answers total) 7 users marked this as a favorite
I'm reading a novel, and the author uses the word "horizon" often enough that it's distracting, when it seems like other good options would have been available. Was this an oversight in the editing process?