Poem Identification
September 9, 2010 9:08 AM   Subscribe

Poem Identification: Villanelle with lines from a Supremes song

I read this poem in 2002 or 2003, and it was not terribly old at the time I read it; it had probably been published within the previous ten years. I can't remember, but I think I read it in a collection by the poet (as opposed to a literary magazine or anthology).

It was by a female poet. It was a villanelle (99% sure it was a villanelle), with the repeating lines coming from a song--again, 99% sure it was a Supremes song (I'm thinking, Baby, Where Did Our Love Go). Here's what I recall the poem being about, but it could be misremembered, or misinterpreted: a child watches an adult party that her parents are throwing from the sidelines. As with all villanelles, the repeated lines change in meaning as the poem goes on, and become very sad.
posted by Ideal Impulse to Writing & Language (5 answers total) 3 users marked this as a favorite
 
How long was the poem? If it was short, try searching for sestinas or triolets as well.

This sounds like the sort of thing Wendy Cope would write, but I'm not finding anything that matches.
posted by maryr at 9:31 AM on September 9, 2010


Response by poster: I would say it was about a page long. I remember the stanzas being short, which is why I'm thinking villanelle, not sestina.
posted by Ideal Impulse at 9:36 AM on September 9, 2010


It's not Maxine Kumin, the Parents' Pantoum, is it?
posted by willbaude at 11:07 AM on September 9, 2010


Response by poster: Alas, no--I'm entirely confident it had song lyrics in it.

In fact, now I'm just wishing that I'd asked for recommendations for any poems with song lyrics in them. Well, in another week.
posted by Ideal Impulse at 11:25 AM on September 9, 2010


The Captain Of The 1964 Top of the Form Team by Carol Ann Duffy is full of song lyrics, and mentions the Supremes. I think it misses your other criteria, though.
posted by willbaude at 12:35 PM on September 9, 2010


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