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Monday You are part of the incompleteness ofThis is the only poem I have ever really connected with, and so in that sense maybe it belongs in a thread about "poems for people who dislike poetry." But since that thread isn't here and this one is I'm going to write in this one.
my afternoon. The lessons of, the motivational speakers of, etc. etc.
come upstairs. They see me at my desk.
They raise the oceans
one half of three degrees over a twenty year old's life.
They take coffee apart. Like it's two. The articulation, it comes
apart, too. A mother do this. A daughter do this. Everyone who is near me
smell like anise.
And I am very attracted to your eye lids and the minutesI love this. It's I guess the most complex metaphysical conceit in a poem that is littered with quasi-throwaway/joke metaphyical one-liners, like "I think of myself as a restaurant in Chelsea that wakes up at two a.m. and goes / to a restaurant in Chelsea." On first reading of this "chair" business my own lazy brain was like "what? fuck this it's some crazy poemy bullshit that doesn't make sense" but because Lin had won me over so completely by the time I'd reached this point (the end), and because it's positioned at the end and so seems kind of important, I took the time to read it over again and try to figure it out.
and the chairs that think they are
volcanoes in your eyes and I think
you are standing between something I see and
something I don't. But I don't really have
the chair when this occurs.
posted by Area Control at 6:21 AM on April 13, 2010 [2 favorites]