Frances went to her room and took some gravel out of the drawer where she had been saving it. She put the gravel into her empty coffee can and put the lid on it.That moment shows so much quiet observation of how people actually behave: that a little girl has a special cache of gravel (or whatever weird little mundane collection) in her dresser drawer, that she would unself-consciously make the loudest possible noise while everyone else wants the baby to sleep, and that instead of jumping right into a scolding, a tired but experienced parent would start with a quiet "Please don't do that" --- that all feels so real to me.
Frances marched into the living-room and rattled the gravel in the can. As she marched she sang a marching song:
Here we go marching, rattley bang!
"Please don't do that, Frances.", said Father.
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posted by chloe.gelsomino at 2:24 PM on December 17, 2012