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CAROL
David --
DAVID
Mother, go back!
Carol sees Kirk --
CAROL
Jim --
DAVID
Go back. I'm going to kill him.
CAROL
(takes a breath)
You do that and you'll have murdered
your father.
All react. David and Kirk, facing each other, are
turned to stone. Bones, Jedda and Chekov turn to look
at Carol, wondering. Terrell very casually takes the
phaser from Jedda.
TERRELL
(cool)
I'll hold onto this.
But Kirk and Carol ignore them and walk towards each
other. There are tears in Carol's eyes. She reaches
up, trying to smile and touches his hair --
CAROL
You've got a little grey --
She can't. Kirk takes her and holds her tightly, look-
ing at David, over her shoulder. He stands there,
stunned, looking back.
KIRK
Carol. Is that true?
She nods --
KIRK
(continuing)
Why didn't you tell me?
DAVID
She's making it up! My father was
Professor --
CAROL
David, you're just making this
harder --
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KIRK
Why? Why didn't you tell me?
CAROL
How can you ask me that? Were we
together? Where we going to be?
You had your world and I had mine.
I wanted him in mine, not chasing
through the universe with his father.
Kirk turns away, overcome. She watches him.
CAROL
(continuing)
He's a lot like you in many ways.
Nothing I could do about it. He's
smarter, of course; that goes without
saying. Most of Genesis is really
his.
Her joke doesn't take effect. He doesn't turn.
CAROL
(continuing)
This is it, isn't it? We're never
going to get out of here.
Kirk says nothing.
CAROL
(continuing)
Please. Tell me what you're feeling.
Kirk hesitates, comes back and sits next to Chekov; he
changes Bones' compress on the ear as he finally speaks.
KIRK
There's a man I haven't seen in
fifteen years who thinks he's killed
me. You show me a son who'd almost be
happy to help him. My son. My life
that could have been and wasn't. What
am I feeling? I'm feeling old --
worn out.
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A later version of the script pares this down a bit, and it's no longer so clear:
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DAVID
(to Kirk)
You!
KIRK
Where's Doctor Marcus?
DAVID
I'm Doctor Marcus!
Carol reaches the tunnel entrance to the cave -
CAROL
Jim -
KIRK
Is that David?
DAVID
Mother! He killed everybody we
left behind.
CAROL
Oh, of course he didn't. David,
you're just making this harder -
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KIRK
(continuing, to Carol)
I did what you wanted. I stayed
away. Why didn't you tell me?
CAROL
How can you ask me that? Were we
together? Were we going to be?
You had your world and I had mine.
And I wanted him in mine, not chasing
through the universe with his father.
Kirk turns away, overcome. She watches him.
CAROL
(continuing)
Actually, he's a lot like you in
many ways. Please. Tell me what
you're feeling.
KIRK
There's a man out there I haven't
seen in fifteen years who's trying
to kill me. You show me a son
that'd be happy to help him. My son.
My life that could have been and
wasn't. And what am I feeling?
Old - worn out.
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But neither of these match what's actually in the movie. I dug out the 2002 Director's Cut DVD and the 2009 remaster and checked the dialogue from the relevant scenes (dialogue is the same in both versions; times are from the 2009 DVD):
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01:06:40
KIRK
Is that David?
DAVID
Mother, he killed everybody we
left behind.
CAROL
Oh, of course he didn't. David,
you're just making this harder.
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01:12:50
KIRK
I did what you wanted. I stayed
away. Why didn't you tell him?
CAROL
How can you ask me that? Were we
together? Were we going to be?
You had your world, and I had mine.
And I wanted him in mine, not chasing
through the universe with his father.
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This is very close to the later script, but there's a key difference: in the script, Kirk says "Why didn't you tell me?" but in the movie, it's "Why didn't you tell him?"You are not logged in, either login or create an account to post comments
posted by Mapes at 4:49 PM on October 11