Critique me, please!

April 10, 2009 4:44 PM

A friend and I write erotic stories together and would like some critique on a couple of them. I've submitted it to LustyLibrary.com but seems they are pretty backlogged and it's going to take a while to get posted. Can you suggest any sites where I can post these stories and get some feedback on them?
posted by Mysticalchick to human relations (8 comments total)

Literotica.com

Post and beg for feedback.
posted by Monday at 5:36 PM on April 10

Lushstories.com.
posted by torquemaniac at 5:44 PM on April 10

I came in to suggest literotica too. Seems like a pretty well trolled site.
posted by CwgrlUp at 7:09 PM on April 10

Literotica has forums, which have people who will actually tell you what works, what doesn't, correct your grammar, etc. There is also a user comment section on each story, but the comments seem to be more like "lol, hott!"
posted by wholebroad at 7:53 PM on April 10

What wholebroad said.
posted by whycurious at 10:14 PM on April 10

You can join the mailing list at The Erotica Readers & Writers Association.

The writers there are generally extremely helpful with critiques, feedback, and advice. Stories are selected each month and featured on the website.

I heartily recommend them.
posted by Savannah at 10:22 PM on April 10

Nthing literotica.
posted by smeater44 at 10:14 AM on April 11

Thanks for your suggestions. I've taken them and posted my story one one and joined the mailing list. Much appreciated, all.
posted by Mysticalchick at 5:28 PM on April 11